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Fingers
in Chain By Uchechukwu Agodom
(Nigeria)
A massive flood full of sad punches hissed down small
and big structures that barred its way in the slum
town of Oheri, where a deep creek primed by the flood
swelled to distinction.
With heavy heart and compelled by the trafficking
money dangling before him, Obene defiled the
outlandish hissing of the flood, again and again, as
he forged his way forcefully through the barring
poetry of the flood. The sound of the flood possessed
the whole place, and debris of all parlances played
out the flood’s script.
He encountered two men fighting in the flood, while
the rain cloud threatened with barks of another bite
on the earth. The men shouted in ghastly notes, rammed
themselves together in clangorous tones and fail into
the flood. The flood consumed them with dirty water
and rubbish, and they became unseen battling beings in
the cover of the flood for sometime before they
riotously emerged from the flood and continued their
theatre of war.
Obene watched them decant planks from the growing
flood that was up to his knee and constituted the
planks as weapons. Blood began to bore testimony to
the feverish theatre. He watched blood mingle with the
flood in a blurring note from one of the fighters. He
watched flood mingle with blood.
Obene got to Ido’s house just as the rainstorm pieced
itself into a giant fountain of noise. He extended a
cold knock on the door sick with crack and amends
wrought with rusted wires and nails.
"Who?"
"I!"
"Who is I?"
"Obene !"
"Obene?"
The door creaked and rocked open. Ido’s face popped
out, examined Obene feverishly with cold air, and
urged him into the house.
Buta was sleeping on the floor. Rags that posed as
cloths hung on nails posted on the walls. Rainwater
wriggled into the room from the savagely aged roof.
The cold inside challenged the cold outside.
Obene sat down.
"Is that the child?"
"Yes, my only son, Buta, 10 years."
"His age is okay."
"Okay?"
"Yes."
"For two days, we have eaten nothing except garri and
palm kernels. We are dying of hunger. Since my husband
died last year, we have been suffering... his people do
not care about us."
"Do not worry. Soon very soon, you will have abundant
to eat, and to even give away- when Buta goes to a
cocoa farm in Ivory Coast, he will work and earn
enough money which will be sent to you as quickly as
possible."
"How soon?"
"Very, very soon. The farms are vast and rich. You
will be given money in dollars or pounds- which ever
one you prefer."
The rainstorm thundered on, and they heard sound of a
crashing house in the sprawling slum, and a distant
cry of sorrow.
"Tonight. He will come with me, and it is the
beginning of your star of riches and glory. You will
be able in few weeks to stand tall in the slum, with
your money, and command the slum dwellers as you wish,
and watch them dance to your hoots, and even lick your
dusty shoes clean, and in the gathering of your fellow
women, you will be able to display your riches and
over flowing stocks of costly costumes."
***
Night wore a heavy face when Buta was taken into a
room where nine children were sleeping hurdled
together like empty sacks. There was nothing in the
room except a mat on which the children were sleeping.
He knew Obene locked the door. He sat on a small space
left on the mat and waited for the children to rise
from sleep. The room was ghastly dirty and chorused an
offensive odor. A stray moonlight dazzled the room
faintly. Owls hooted, inconsolably, very close.
One of the sleeping children awoke, saw Buta, and sat
down.
Their eyes traded unquiet contact, and steered away.
Buta watched him stand up, walk to the door and tried
to open it, but the door stood firmly rooted.
"Who are you?"
"Buta."
"Akpan."
"My mother gave me to the man who brought me into this
room."
"My father gave me to them. My father gave me to them.
My father-a retired worker always denied his pension."
"My mother, a widow...they said I would work in a
cocoa farm…and earn for my mother dollars."
"They said I would earn pounds for my father.
My father danced and danced and blew his flute
hotly to celebrate his new found source of wealth - in
hard currency."
"My mother did not dance nor sing as she usually do in
any good situation that comes our way. She was crying
when I left, but, but I did not cry. I cannot cry. It
is for our good. She has been suffering. Nobody cares
for her. My father’s people, all they do, is threaten
her...on one occasion, my father’s big sister
slapped my mother and she cried with swollen eyes, and
I cried too...so, I must go to this rich farm and
earn money for my lovely mother. I hate to see her
suffer."
The other children awoke from sleep.
"But I wonder why they always lock the door," Akpan
said.
"I wonder, too," Buta said.
The door of the room opened with a loud blaring
sound. A woman with a solemn - ridden face came in with
a large bowl. She placed the bowl before them
expressionlessly, walked out, and closed the door with
another loud blaring sound. The children looked at
each other as the sound faded away.
Akpan looked into the bowl and saw ten small lumps of
yam in a watery presence, and said,
"We are starving. We are scantily fed, upon all their
stories of piles of money. For five days that we were
brought into this room, they have been serving us
things that look like stool and muddy affair. Am I not
saying the truth, Ado?"
"You are," Ado answered, "but it is better than what I
eat at home."
Buta picked one lump of yam and started eating it. The
other boys did the same. They heard a dart of an angry
trade of words outside through the door, and listened
for a long time and did not hear any sound further.
"This room is like a police cell." Buta reasoned. "It
is a cell."
Akpan gave the bowl to Buta.
"Thank you," Buta said, as he took the bowl and
stretched his right fingers into the bowl and started
dribbling the tasteless liquid in the bowl into his
mouth.
***
The day declared its scene open. A stray sunlight set
the room faintly aglow. On finding the day awake, Buta
wanted to go to the toilet, and said,
"I want to empty my bowel."
"You want to?"Akpan asked, in the faint presence of
sleep
"Toilet."
"Go to the extreme end," Akpan said, as he rose up and
walked towards the window, "of the room and ease yourself.
"This room?"
"Yes."
"It is not healthy."
"They know it. We know it too."
The other children stirred away from the arm of sleep.
"This room is also our toilet" Akpan said.
Buta sat on a pillar of thought.
"This is a cell, indeed," Akpan confirmed, "as you
rightly said in the night - like a brutal police cell
in my place that people talk about."
The door threw itself open roughly, and the woman with
solemn-ridden face came in and collected the bowl.
Buta greeted her, while none of the other boys cared
to greet her, and she did not respond. Before she
stepped out of the room, Buta thunderously stated,
"Please, this room is too filthy for human habitation,
please, find me a broom to sweep it, and it is not
healthy using the same room both for human habitation
and for a toilet."
The woman responded by slapping the door close,
roughly.
They could hear the wind caressing the trees outside,
and the birds enjoying their freedom with songs and
slapping of wings.
A fierce argument began to rage outside the bounds of the
room, and they listened attentively, but they could
not decipher anything.
"I don’t understand." Buta said.
"I, too." Ado said.
"I don’t." Akpan said.
The argument gave way to the sound of struggle outside
the bounds of the room, and they listened.
"It appears that some people are fighting."Buta
guessed.
"May be." Akpan said.
"I think that I may fall sick because of the deadly
odor here." Buta said.
Ado laughed heartily and said,
"No odour can make me fall sick for our slum place has
a mighty repulsive odour that has no match."
"Buta," Akpan called, "you will soon get used to this
room’s repulsive air."
"I cannot." Buta replied.
The sound of struggle was no more.
Suddenly, Buta began to vomit and they rallied round
him and held him.
"Easy." They rolled.
Buta cleaned his hands and cloths with his hand. They
consoled him.
"We are not free, here." He said.
"It is true." The other boys agreed.
"We are not free."
"It is true."
A great foul air captured the room with a terrible
zeal, and a great wall of discomfort stood before
them.
"Hum!" Buta guarded his nose feverishly, "who let this
terrible air out of his anus?"
Nobody responded to him. The great foul air mingled
with the unnerving odor that has been and great was
the odor of the room.
Akpan shot a dream of what he would like to be in the
future before them,
"A great teacher I will be in future. I will teach
against evil, against..."
"I only dream," Ado interrupted rudely, "of getting my
stomach full in the, and let hunger run away
from me."
"People dream," Akpan philosophized, "of becoming
great, and you dream of food."
"Because we cannot continue to beg for food," Ado said
in defense.
"First," Akpan pressed, "be a great person, and then
food will not be the problem."
"First," Ado argued, "get food to eat, and then, you
will be a great person."
"First, a great person!"
"First, food!"
"Great person!"
"Food!"
"Great person!"
"Food!"
"You are wrong!"
"You are wrong!"
"I am right!"
"I am right!"
"First..."
"This is a cell." Buta said.
"It is." The other boys chorused.
Ado walked to one end of the room and defecated. The
room became instantly possessed by the repulsive odor
of faeces.
They watched Buta interestingly as he struggled to
topple the odor as he feverishly covered his nose in
futility. They did not care to cover their noses, and
out of a sudden dart of laughter, Akpan said,
"That is the life in this room - in this cell." And
Ado said,
"I do not care about the odor of the room - for it is
not much different from the ghastly odor that
pervades our slum place."
Buta began to cry, walked to the window tried to open
it, and found out that it was rigidly closed from the
outside. He pressed his nose on the window and rested
there. His tears raged and built up into a remarkable
train. Somehow, the cry of birds from outside began to
console him as he listened.
Suddenly Akpan began to sing a toneless song harvested
from his memory, and they listened to him, rise to the
climax and then come down, and he said,
"For all the days that we have been here, we have not
taken our bath nor changed our cloths - the journey to
earn from cocoa farms lavish riches and glory."
"You have not?" Buta said in surprise, "I am beginning
to change my mind - I will tell Mr. Obene to take me
back to my mother, until they are ready will I be
ready, to go."
"Are you changing your mind?" Akpan asked.
The door responded to the question before Buta could.
Obene came into the room; with a face as heavy as a
storm cloud.
" Bring them in!" He ordered.
Two men urged four teenage girls into the room. The
door clenched its mouth as Obene and the men walked
out of the room.
***
When the night was in deep display of its might, the
door opened with a staggering noise. Obene appeared
with two fistic-looking men.
They guided the children out of the room onto the
stage of a vast sprawling darkness.
"The journey has begun," somebody said.
The might of the night was such that nobody’s figure
could easily be deciphered from the quagmire that was
the night’s lot for the children. The children
stumbled and fell down on and on, as they
were led into a forest. The sound of the forest’s
nocturnal creatures countered the unquiet silence of
the men and the children. The children endowed a
turmoil that was both a forest of darkness and the
silence of the men around them.
"Please, it is too dark for us to go without any
torchlight..." Buta ventured.
"Shut up!" A voice cried.
Buta hit a stump and fell down like a thunder-stricken
tree. Obene shot him up with his hands. Tears formed a
well in Buta’s eyes, and guided their ways down his
face in trickles. He felt a boiling wound on his right
toe. Suddenly the tears began to challenge flood.
"Yes...the water body". Obene said. They stopped
walking.
"Set the canoe in order." The two men set the canoe in
order.
"Set?"
"Yes."
They guided the children into the canoe. They were well
crammed in the canoe. In the darkness, the canoe sailed
further into the darkness.
"The ship is not far."
"More in the ship."
"More."
The darkness clenched them deeper and deeper.
"I am afraid of this night sea journey." Buta said
in the mist of tears.
The expanding clench of the darkness appeared to be
the only response to him.
"It is too dark!" he said again.
Obene slapped him in a fist of anger. He cried loudly.
Obene threatened ghastly to throw him into the sea
if he did not stop crying. Out of fear, Buta subdued
the torment of pain in him.
Suddenly, a mighty rainstorm descended on them, such
that the darkness of the night was immense. As the
rainstorm increased its might, all the children began
to cry. Obene’s threatening poise did not calm them
down.
The canoe was on a vast mass of water. They went very
far from the land. The feverish hand of cold was
upon everybody in the canoe.
A strong wind began to blow, stirring the canoe against
its appointed course. The canoe began to head towards
the deep sea. The two men tried to counter the wind’s poise
with a counterpoise by paddling against the wind, but
it was a futile act.
Some one began to pray.
" That is good," Obene said "that is timely. There is
nothing like prayer! A good one! Well carved! Flows!
Flows like a river!"
The person was still praying. He was shouting. Obene
was still talking-and shouting. But the storm was
mocking their voices by banging, by thundering.
"Turn! Turn!" Obene shouted, longing to use his will
to turn the canoe back from the sea, and turned wildly
as if he has gone mad.
"Turn! Turn what?" someone shouted.
Obene shot out a blind ball of his right fingers into
the darkness, as an answer.
The storm was a maddening increase of sad punches,
grinding sadder and sadder.
Some one accidentally toppled into the sea leaving
behind ghastly echoes like the sound of a memory of a
coin tossed into a vast water body.
" A drowning prodigy. A drowning place."Obene
shouted to himself; he knew that he was the only one
that heard his own words, for nothing was heard or
could be heard except the sound of the storm.
The canoe began to behave like a speck of dust,
aimless, drift-ridden and helpless before the wind. A
spirited struggle tempted Obene , though he has lost
the strength to bark like a dog, but he could bite
like a dog. And at the touch of a feather of pain, from
a sudden unconscious punch from a man’s fist, he
punched and slapped rudely around, hitting Ado badly.
Ado was emptied into the sea by the effect. Buta did
not see it, but felt it.
"A drowning … a drowning," Obene said coldly.
The cold was a growing war against them. It was a
deathly icy star.
" Keep the canoe!"Obene shouted.
Buta began a chattering display of his teeth, and with
that came a bleeding gum which he felt with his tongue
of ice.
They saw nothing but darkness and darkness and they
kept seeing it. They were all crying when something
broke in the canoe, and that cracking event added to
their well and welling of tears.
The rainstorm lowered its mast. Buta could here voices
that dangled close to the fringe of madness. He was
shivering under the icy cloud of cold; and the blood
in his mouth was large enough to fill two teaspoons.
" Yes. It has gone!"Obene shouted, " that full
struggle to spoil my business. It will not work.Oh!
That fool full of sea. Full of sea energy. Ah!
Children rejoice. You can still make it. We can still
make it. We can …"
A thunder cackled.
"Ah! Children, my children,"O bene continued, "
conspirators. Against my business. I have been in this
for seven years! I need glorification. May be that is
what the sea and its mates want to give me after their
tempest. Children, ha, ha, ha, be bold, be strong, ha,
ha, ha …"
The atmosphere began to grow dense with thunder.
"Ado!" Buta called, crying. " Ado! Ado!"
"Shut up!" Obene shouted ghastly. " You brainy idiot."
"Akpan! Akpan!"
" The same fool. You brainy idiot!"
The storm began again, longer and sadder.
The canoe began to be gorged with rainwater; Obene
began to thrust out the water from the canoe with his
bare hands, as there was no vessel in the canoe. His
effort was futile. The wind was winning its battle
against them, and the rainstorm was also winning its
own battle against them. They stopped battling the
elements and surrendered.
When the rainstorm filled the canoe with rainwater, the
canoe began to sink, and its occupants began to shout
and cry. The canoe continued to sink, and all of them
stood up and began to struggle. Even with all their
energetic and ferocious struggle, as fingers in chain,
they sank, deeply, away.
The rainstorm continued its strong fall, and the wind
echoed on and on. The darkness of the night waxed
stronger and stronger.
END