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Stephen Agboratang Makes his Dream
Chapter Four
By Ndim Bernard Ngouche (Cameroon) 
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Chapter four (Senior Secondary School)
From form four to  five, students were so concerned with the subjects that they had chosen in form  three so as to be able to register them at their final examination.  Students were equally called upon to drop off  courses that were like over luggage to them. That was not the case of Stephen  and John who were determined beyond measure to excel as they have always done.
    It was another moment for the principal to  set the goals of the term and that of the academic year. In his usual style he  had this to say “My dear students especially those who have just begun this  long journey of fate, it is going to be a tough battle if you are lazy and  unwilling to saddle your responsibility. For those who know why they are here  and what they want to achieve, we shall work with them so that their dreams are  attainable. Those whose desires are to be street boys then you shall be thrown  out as chaff after the finest grain had being sieved. Discipline here is our  watch word and we shall not tolerate any kind of rubbish from any student even  if that student is my son/daughter”  That  tone was a re-sounding warning to all the students for usually the first term  is the longest and busiest term of the School almanac.
                       Their teachers so itchy to teach began  by pouring notes like water falling from a cascade so as to meet their expected  end. It is a class that has work and work as their preamble for some of the  students may be willing to write their London General Certificate of  Education.  Stephen Agboratang and John  Peters know their target and therefore are as serious as it takes. In order to  put their brains to test, past questions are grappled with all in an attempt to  see if they are on the right track. This is supervised by his brother Sylvanus  Quinoso so that his teachers can assist them. After being a month in School,  the first sequence test is given with the duo making all their papers with  wonderful grades. This does not beat people’s imagination for the results were  no surprise. The second and third sequences were the same as well as the first  term examination.  The first term holiday  or Christmas holiday is at hand once more. As usual Christmas fiesta is a big  event to students and pupils because it gives them the opportunity to have  presents based on their performance in school. It is a moment of reflection for  those with goals and dreams.  After all  the fiesta it was now time enough to begin to prepare for another School term  about to begin in four days’ time.
                              The second term  resumed in a haze and aspirations were rife for to all the students who were  not studious in the last term. The principal in his term resumption address  welcomed all the students with these words “It has never been more urgent than  now for all students to kill distractions and other trivial matters so as to  obtain with delight their main stay in this Prestigious College  aimed at bringing out the best of its students. Calling for very strong  discipline and commitment, he cautioned all the students that he will not fail  to use his vested authority to call to order any ruffian by dismissing her/her  without any waste  of time” The term  usually very short began with the spraying of notes by teachers as if they were  bullets from a cannon. It was fanfare to those who were hard working and  serious for they knew they could only improve their results to become much  better and more performant. After being in college for one month, the first  sequence tests were given and students performed very much better and impressed  both teachers and the administration. The Principal grinned from ear to ear  because his speech had started delivering its results. However other students  only worked to improve rather than challenge or even threaten Stephen and John  Peters’ position; which remains unbeatable. The two friends were unbeatable and  so purposefully organized in their commitment and life’s dreams. The other  sequential results and term exams were constant with the duo having the  following results: Stephen Agboratang 18.05/20 and John Peters 17.05/20.  It was now time for holidays and it was as usual  joy without measure for Stephen and Sylvanus Quinoso who saw Stephen as the  star in the making. He promised Stephen all his support at all moments of his  life and dream. The holidays were used by Stephen and John to clean around  their compounds and yards and then some communal work. The three weeks were  used purposefully understanding that they were both candidates for General  Certificate Examination ordinary level session. It was now time for the third  term and last for them since they were writing with form five students. The  third term was the most crucial as their principal stated “Here we are at the thresh  hold of closing the school year. It has not been a smooth ride for some as much  as they would have loved. A majority were   above par and to them we give our heart praises. We are once more called  to show proof of your hard work and give the school the name you have always  given it. Thanks for your great improvements and thanks for all your wonderful  love. It gives me the pleasure of being a teacher when I look at all your conceited  efforts in making your parents proud and most especially Stephen Agboratang who  has proven that being an orphan was never any barrier attending the potentials  that are inherent and only need a stimulant to spring alive. Stephen Agboratang  showed us that here he found that stimulant and got spurred by the stiff  competition he met here” 
                               Stephen and John  though were preparing for the General Certificate of Education equally took  part in their class assessments were now poised to use the class examinations  plus other G.C.E based questions to sprint at the term’s examination and the  expected G. C.E.  After a month their  results in the first sequence examination with scores 18.65/20 and 17.4 showed  that they were ready for a kill. After scoring so high and stamping their names  on the history hall of fame of their class., they could only smile as they were  gearing to compete with the form five students and other students all over the  national territory.    The rest of the  sequential tests and term examinations remained the same. As most of his mates  who were not writing were vacating, he awaited his turn to show his ability in  the General Certificate Examination.       
                              Stephen Agboratang  and John Peters both registered ten papers for their final examination and were  the touch bearers of their batch and path finders for the rest of the students.  This was because no student before them had been granted this express will to  sit with form five students by the School authority. Their examinations rolled  on for three weeks and wrapped off leaving the students awaiting results with  so much anxiety. In August the bomb got detonated and their school scored their  usual one hundred percent (100%) with Stephen Agboratang obtaining 9papers all  ( A’s) while his friend and Brother John Peters obtaining Seven papers all (A’s)  It was breaking news and all were glad most especially his head teacher Clarkson  Thomas.  The long vacation was all joyful  and Stephen played the best of football that summer holiday. He had rubbed  shoulders with his seniors and made them delighted for his talents and brain.  It was also a moment for him to show appreciation to all who supported him  especially Quinoso Sylvanus who became a father like figure for him and his  brothers. For his extra ordinary performances a grand party was organized by  Sylvanus Quinoso without Stephen Agboratang’s knowledge so as to make it a  surprise gift. He bought an Italian suite for him and a good Italian pair of  shoe to match. It was a good suite for a great party like his success party.  Four shirts of purple, stripped white, Yellow and brown were bought and a tie  so as to make him so distinguished on his day of Joy. Stephen is called in for  the surprise and meets invited guest seated and the microphone given to him to  address his guest as host and graduating student. He had this to say “Success  is so sweet and I am happy and humbled to have you in our home to share in this  great event. I learned of your intention to come for this party a few hours  before it was to hold and got exited for sharing my success with others have  always been my own way of showing appreciation at this moment of jubilation.  This event makes my parents smile wherever they may be at this moment. To you  all once more I say welcome. Thanks for coming and please enjoy yourselves with  all that you can have into your plates”